Halloween story help?

henny · Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 8:16 am Post subject: Halloween story help?

hi...Rolcam
how are you?
Can you pls check my boy's story for Halloween.
Alter if necessary, pls!
txs in advance...
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This is rare to celebrate Halloween in this Middle East, as this is very popular in western countries.

I enjoy both horror movies and jokes but one fine day, I landed myself into hot water! Thank God, it was a merely dream that I ever have of my whole life of 11 years!

During my long Eid holidays, I helped my busy Mum to clean up the cosy attic exactly above my blue room. Aloh! I found an unique rug from the dusty corner. Suddenly, the yellow bulb switched off with a soft bang! Out of curiosity, I spread it across to have a good look outside the small veranda.

Soon, there were series of magic sparkling stars, surrounding me from the strange carpet. I was dumbfounded as it, next carried me like a flying saucer or UFO across the wee balcony! With fear, I clutched the woollen fringes very hard as the magic rug was travelling with a great speed just like a zooming rocket, targeting to the space!
Wow! I thought after journeying through snow-white clouds. I peeped down to have a quick glance below me.

Soon, I was descended slowly to the Land of Pyramids. My poor little heart was thumping so hard after seeing stretches of barren lands, thinking I shall be rottening away into a small weak skeleton! Nevertheless, I was transformed into a young handsome Egyptian Pharaoh namely King Tutankhamen, simply donned as richly royal manner. I was landed, seating on a high throne, all covered with gold and precious gems. My favourite pet, Sphinx Cat was also transformed into a huge Black Panther. It was guarding me well from all those strangers from the court. Moreover, I was feeling so weak and giddy after bearing such a tall heavy kingly crown. Soon, a huge team of medical staff was busy checking me. There was a low murmuring sound that was Greek to me. I was advised a completed bed-rest till my last breathe. My mind was boggling with full of questions and doubts. Thereafter, my sore mouth was sealed well with honey and herbs to wart off the invading evil spirits inside my delicate torso. From my richly decorated quarters, I viewed rows of slaves, slogging day and night, building a famous Pyramid of Giza.Eventually; it was done so grandly with all-important provisions inside. As Egyptians believed that there was a next or new life after death. Next, I founded myself fully embalmed and wrapped with smelly linens. Unfortunately, they were not aware that I was nearly alive! It was impossible for me to scream or escape from the five or eight well built-in coffins. My heart fell when I heard the final door bolted tight to keep the raiders away!

I don’t remember after how long, this pyramid was discovered by Dr.Howard Carter.
My dad was hired as an expert tourist guide to tour this very same pyramid. He also brought his office colleagues who were happening to vacationing that time.
My heart was so full when I heard his usual loud voice, explaining every detail on his mic. This re-echoed on those layers of coffins. After saying few thankful and encouraging prayers, I forced myself to break free from this awful prison. Out of the blue, these curious visitors were freezed with horror after seeing me, fully wrapped Mummy, struggling on my feet.” Daddy, it’s me”, I shouted loudly to him. Dad was thunderstrucked but very angry for playing Halloween pranks to his business people.
He apologized them profoundly, saying I was merely dressed up to celebrate the horror festival! Finally, I was overwhelmed to be back with my very own tribe.

But, I did received a double scolding from my hot-tempered Mum for escaping to Cairo with Dad without her knowledge.

ROLCAM

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